Write a letter to a pen friend in England. Tell her/him about what you did last weekend (around 125 words).

                            

                                        {***}Missing word or wordsPaseo La Centinela

                                        Icod de los Vinos

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                                        26.03.06

{***}Paragraph wrongly indentedDear Jorge.Punctuation or capitalization {1}

{***}Paragraph wrongly indentedHow are you? I hope you are very well.{***}Missing word or words A very strong greeting forWrong word/s your wife and the children{2}. I write this letter forWrong word/s tell you oboutSpelling mistake our hobby{3}. Do you remember last year in Garachico.Punctuation or capitalization

    TwoWrong word/s weekend ago we went to Garachico again. We were very early{***}Punctuation or capitalization about atWord order half past seven in the morning, in the same pleaceWord order {***}Spelling mistake {4}. We were thereWrong word/s {5}, my brother Robert my old friend Antonio and me.

{***}Paragraph wrongly indentedThe pleaceSpelling mistake for the meeting was Las Cucharitas. Las Cucharitas is a sailor'sPunctuation or capitalization canteen. All the people there spoke{6} about the sea.

{***}Paragraphing problemThe wonderful sea! One hour later all the equipment was ready for aThis text is not necessary submergenceWrong word/s. The sea was calm and the weaterSpelling mistake was crystal clear. We put our wet suits on.

    At nine o'clock that Sunday morning we began to submerge after we jumped into the sea. There were a lot of fish everywhere. We saw a little octopus and a pair of starfish.

{***}Paragraphing problemIt was a very nice underwater dive. One hour later we were in the quay spokenGrammar mistake oboutSpelling mistake the fishWrong word/s plants{***}Punctuation or capitalization etc. It's always the same thing, you know…

    Jorge{***}Punctuation or capitalization come soon, and tell me the day forWrong word/s meet usWrong word/s inWrong word/s the airport. Don't forget your wet suit ad fins{7}.

    {***}Missing word or wordsYour friend Tino.{8}

 

Statistics

InstancesDescription
6Punctuation or capitalization error
1This text is not necessary
3Missing word or words
2Paragraphing problem (e.g. no clear topic sentence)
5Spelling mistake
9Wrong word/s
2Word order
1Grammar mistake
3Paragraph wrongly indented
Negative total: 32

 

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